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nadinesellers
nadine sellers
United States, Missouri

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Anymore

Anymore.

i don' t tell of my predilections anymore,
i don' tell of the poems in the drawer,
those which presage the future.

i don't tell of my dreams anymore,
i don't keep a journal in my dresser,
the one that would tell of fears.

no, i don't tell of my worries anymore,
don't talk to the hairdresser,
the one i never had.

no, i don't confide in anyone, anymore,
i have no faithful bartender,
no i have no friend,

but the one in me.

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nadinesellers Comment by: nadinesellers - 2008-06-29 18:27
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hey thanks for the valuable input. i'll be reading you as well when i return to the net.ns
jeremydevaughn Comment by: jeremydevaughn Online- 2008-06-29 17:50
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Well-constructed.
I like the concept and sentence structure.
Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2008-05-15 01:00
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Minor, typographical thing. Two Anymore's in a row are a little much. Use the bold title as your first line.

Flows well. It's good, finding strength in the last line.
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