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| Interesting. Would love to know where it's going! |
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Interesting. And intriguing. I like it a lot. It makes me wonder about the mental state of Peta.
This little snippet has just enough information to stand on its own, while making me want so much more. I think it could be included in a bigger story and it would fit in nicely. |
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Comment by: kayc - 2008-05-01 04:30
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| This might make a good snippet of dialogue for a horror story. |
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a bit confusing but can see where you're coming from.
it's masks some deeper emotions. with expansion it could be great. |
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Comment by: brad19 - 2008-04-30 19:44
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| Um...yeah, now that I look back it kind of is. It was a part of a larger work that I cut down... |
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