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drchase
dante cox
United States, new york, newburgh

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Ethereal Beauty

Phuck you Im sick & tired
these werds are literal

life sucks too

When ur reachin for the sky its my hand that may touch u

These thoughts shud last EVER 2 plus 2

My knowledge given is pivotal
My condition is critical

Strength of my heart strive of desire far from minimal

My eyes on the prize and my speech isn't subliminal

Life is killin me...i guess reality is criminal

I think im in need of a slug at first sight

Strangers said they'll cry fam will strug on my hearst night

Bark at hatred...ignorance is a lil bug wit a worse bite

If im caged will u believe in love at first sight

It hurts right? To hear one talkin of such

U think its nonsense but lovin me is hardly a crutch

Its so hard to love myself so my God i trust

He will put me wit a star that's shootin like Kobe in da clutch

Either way...by Heaven...or Earth it aint leave or stay

She'll never choose to depart from me but sometimes she'll lean away

Hopefully i dont meet another runaway serial cutie

Stealin keys to hearts and withholdin other womens ethereal beauty

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LucyInDaSky Comment by: LucyInDaSky - 2008-05-06 12:53
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awesome meaning... i honestly love this
thembraincells Comment by: thembraincells - 2008-05-01 21:30
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Really good meaning, and rhythm. Good job! I love it, good vocabulary as well.
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