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Jorbian
J. D. Boller
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United States, Arizona, Prescott

Words: 84
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Please

What is it like
I want to know
is it really so
do you have it

I want it so
let it be mine
it will be fine
can it I know

It can be fine
if you let it
and I'll be it
can it be mine

So I'll bet it
to all be good
if you just would
and you let it

If that's all right
can I have it
if that's okay
just give me this night

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thembraincells Comment by: thembraincells Online- 2008-05-01 21:38
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This is so simple, and can be interpreted in many different ways, very good. It's so broad it even becomes narrow. Great work!
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