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spare me yours
Spare me your bullshit;
'cause if you knew what I know
you wouldn't bother to show
that you care if I live or die.
And if I am for real than
my stance on life is my appeal
to someone who can't help but to
decieve and lie.
I know what it is that attracts
the ones I've chosen to defy,
so spare me your bullshit.
Be fake;
tell lies;
have all of your hello's
end in tragic goodbye's.
Latch on tight,
burrow in my skin like a tick;
see in me what you cannot obtain inside,
and use me to hide;
seeping through my skin to strike from within
with a poisonous bite, ruining everthing
good like a parasite, swearing the truth
when you know you can't help but lie;
spare me your bullshit.
Be fake;
tell lies;
fuck over everyone that cares
and sever all healthy ties.
Walk around with your dull, stupid stare;
trying to pretend as if you really fucking care.
Acting as if your a victim claiming life isn't fair,
just sitting around wining and crying "help,"
rarely moving from your chair.
Spare me your bullshit, I've heard all I can take.
Be fake;
tell lies;
have everything you say and do
be a clue that leads to your demise.
Everything I know as truth, is a lie;
I can see it when I look deep into
your dark and hollow eyes. So
spare me your bullshit, PLEASE!
because I am sure that I've heard
it all before; do me a favor
and show yourself to the door,
I can't take anymore.
Be fake;
tell lies;
I don't fucking care;
just don't forget to write me in
on your bullshit list, as one to spare.
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-06-22 17:08
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| It is very rare for me to read a poem...no let me rephrase that...this is the best poem or lyrics (if it is for a song, which seems to be the case by the repetition), that I have ever read! I have read a lot of poems on this site and if someone were to ask me 10 minutes ago, what my favorite was I would not be able to tell them. Now I do have a favorite. I know I am gushing like an idiot, sorry.--Did I mention I like this? =) |
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| Stunning Adam. The anger you have here is almost scary. As if your fist is gonna slam through the bulshitter's face at any moment. At times it feels as though you almost invite it but then push away again. I like the repeat refrain you use here and especially enjoyed the rhyme. |
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Comment by: Juliet - 2006-03-06 04:31
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| Very honest and hard hitting, I really like this very much, there is a tremendous amount of emotion and power in the words..I can relate to this a lot! |
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Comment by: - 2006-03-03 08:24
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I like the honesty in your poem I have felt the very same way
keep it up i really enjoyed it |
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| i am not sure why but i like it. I love the way you play around with words, and the repetition you use. this poem had to make me think, so maybe thats why i am not sure why. but its good. |
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