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Randy Chavarria
Randy Chavarria
United States, Minnesota, South Saint Paul

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Mad Girl

Mad Girl

I hear her screams,
In my ears they run.
Each word tied together
In a shreik undone.

Is that really what
Resides deep inside you?
Does it live,
Is this true,

That those sounds,
Grotesque the hues,
Are packed deep down?
What's a simpleton to do

With a mad girl?
Even if I tried,
Not for the world
Would she change her mind.

-Randy Chavarria

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Randy Chavarria Comment by: Randy Chavarria - 2008-05-04 08:14
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Thanks for the review lilgoldenray.
lilgoldenray Comment by: lilgoldenray - 2008-05-02 12:17
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tee hee... I love the title... I have been called a mad girl on many an occasion but I don't think I could quite be compared to the person the persona is describing...lol I liked this poem alot... especially the part "What's a simpleton to do" lmao... This was a good read... thnks...
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