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BoyUninterrupted
Tlotlang Molefe
South Africa, North West Province, Mafikeng

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Productivity --
A laptop and cubicle
Are bars to its cage

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kamereon Comment by: kamereon Online- 2008-09-13 21:31
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i share the sentiment
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-06-24 09:19
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I like the irony here of cyber space and the restriction of walls.
pj Comment by: pj - 2008-05-06 01:28
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office enviroment artistically envisioned with only 10 words
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2008-05-03 20:07
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Its harder to write something like this with so few words. Well done! The metaphor is current, I like that. Sounds like days at the office... ;)
thembraincells Comment by: thembraincells - 2008-05-02 14:41
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This is so simple, and the point really comes across, but I think you could have made it long. But this is just as effective.
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