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Vachelle McFarland
United States, CA, Los Angeles

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A Junkie's Lament

A Junkie’s Lament

by vlm




Heroin—yeah, baby

My bright and golden lady,

When I’m out and feeling cold

She takes me in, if truth be told




She gets me up when I am down

Then puts me back unsafe, unsound;

Close to death I hurt for more

A kiss of life on Hades’ shore




I’ve been there and now I’m back

To try again while making tracks

Like a fat man on a treadmill

Chasing donuts with a jelly fill




I’ll not be free until I learn

You get from life the things you earn

But if I die before I wake

Well, you know, that’s just the breaks




I’ve given up my life control

I’ve lost my heart, I’ve lost my soul

An empty shell is all I am

So I roam this village of the damned




Looking for that next sweet fix

I’ll beg or rob or turn some tricks

Whatever gets me to that high

I’m tired now, fuck you, goodbye

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vlm Comment by: vlm - 2008-05-12 15:24
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Thanks! I view life as a struggle. And aren't we all addicted to something? The power of pleasure is a strong force with which to contend. It is what we all seek in our lives in one way or another. And the sheer joy of having your pleasure principles fired chemically is irresistible when your life is otherwise void of love and happiness, fulfillment and contentment. We all struggle with our drugs of peer pressure, wealth attainment, sexual congress, video games, food, etc. But our seeming ability to function within the world is probably the main thing that sets us apart. That was my underlying statement.
vanessaniki Comment by: vanessaniki - 2008-05-03 11:12
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Wow! that's a good piece. It shows the love-hate relationship between an addict and the drug.
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