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pinzerino
Lynsey Neilson
United Kingdom, Scotland- a country, not a state, not a province

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‘It is better tae huv loved an loast than ne’er tae huv loved at all’

bollocks tae that
that’s whit Ah say
that bastard didnae huv a clue
how Ahm feeling
Ah demand compensation
For this hairt that’s in many pieces
It’s aw his fault
Ah wish Ah’d ne’er met hur
It wid aw huv been sae much easier
That wey

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Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-05-23 05:34
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Liked this one too, Lynsey!
Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling - 2008-05-04 11:07
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Yes I sense the bitterness and indignation. Very to the point like a snapshot of feelings expressed in a moment of time.
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