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Too Expensive (Liquid/Karjon 34)
"Twenty-five dollars, pachuco."
"That's too damn high."
"Choo wan it, choo pay for it."
"Hell, you ain't worth twenty-five dollars."
"How the hell would choo know?"
"Tell you what — I'll give you ten."
She cussed me in liquid Spanish and shot me the bird.
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Comment by: Arley - 2008-05-19 04:22
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| Running a little behind schedule, aren't we, heh heh? Thanks! |
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Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-05-18 13:38
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Excellent, Arley - no crits, just enjoyed the read and smiled at the end.
Cheers
Karen |
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Comment by: Arley - 2008-05-13 05:52
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| Thanks Troy! This was inspired by a friend of mine as a matter of fact, heh heh. |
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Comment by: troyarn - 2008-05-13 03:41
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| Another good read. I am impressed how you can tell so much with so few words. This same scene happened to a ´friend´ of mine once. |
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Comment by: Arley - 2008-05-11 06:34
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| Thanks Anna! |
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