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Zlady
J. Camille Ramirez
United States

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Empty Space

I’ve been looking to fill that
Empty Space,

With someone who speaks with the least bit
Of Grace.

Who can make me laugh, but be sweet, too.

Who makes me think of something
Besides You.

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thembraincells Comment by: thembraincells - 2008-05-05 19:06
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Aw, I love this so much! The last line is amazing, and you've got great rhythm.
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