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Zlady
J. Camille Ramirez
United States

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Said

I love the way you smile,
The way laugh,
The way you talk,

I love the way you look at me,
Like a human, not like a rock.

I even love the way you make me feel,
Because for once this feeling's
All-to-Real.

But what I love most of all,
No matter how cliche is sounds,
Is the way you say my name,
As it makes my heart-beat pound.

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thembraincells Comment by: thembraincells - 2008-05-05 19:07
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This is really cute. =] Good job, I like how you list the things he does, not just how- well, it's hard to explain, but I really like it.
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