Originally
Like a wave
Merging back into the ocean
Visually
It was never
Anything but the whole
Originally
May 5th, 2008
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Comment by: Orpheus Online- 2008-05-08 00:04
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| Elements of the whole, when viewed in isolation, creates the need for terms to describe aspects of the whole which is merely a perspective created, justified and universalised. This is a good poem, it states the obvious we often forget. |
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