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kentuckymike
mike miller
United States, california, anaheim

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Superficialism

I am just the same as you!
With a few minor details....

You drive a BMW, and I push a cart.
Your parents paid for your college, and me a welfare recipient.
You had steak for dinner, and I have not eaten at all.
You have perfect health, while I can't afford a doctor.
You are looked upon with admiration, and I can't find any respect.
You are the life of the party, while I am gazing in through the window.
You have a loving and supportive group of friends and family, while I am a network of one.
Every Saturday you have a tee time at the Country Club, and every Saturday at noon I eat at the mission.
You have hopes, dreams and desires, and so do I.
So, when you are out drinking with friends in the city, and you go into the alley to piss. Don't shower my home with urine, because I have emotions too.


Kentucky Mike

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kentuckymike Comment by: kentuckymike - 2008-05-13 06:44
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Thanks, will do.
pitbull Comment by: pitbull - 2008-05-12 14:50
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oh thats nice..I know what you mean...I have done it the tough way...good work
read some of my other stuff tell us what you think
jgilgun Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-05-06 06:09
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Hm. Not a wasted word. Very well written. What is keeping the narrator down?
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