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itsalrightma
Tyler Goins
United States, texas, deer park

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Lying in the snow

Where did you go?
And what did you take?
While your lying in snow
And you’re starting to flake

So will you please give this a try?
Stop all your lying
I can see it in your eyes
So stop the hiding

White and green
White and green
The fire did grow
The fire did grow

But you’re still lying, in the snow
You’re starting to melt
But not with the snow
And I can’t bare the guilt

I just want to save you
Not push you away
You need to just break through
But I know you will just stray

White and green
White and green
The fire did grow
The fire did grow

And you will still be lying
In the snow

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jgilgun Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-05-06 06:05
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I get this poem. It would make a great song. Have you tried setting it to music?
The pun is effective and would be great in a song.
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