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What a smart girl is
That which seeks beauty in life
Raising it to Art
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i like how effective this is. it is short but packs so much beauty in it, like looking at the majesty of the universe in a dew drop on a blade of grass.
I don't know how much you were trying for it, but you actually hit the Zen influence that I do not see often in haiku online. Nice job. Excellent job with it.
