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ProfessionalMuse
Rachel Peacock
United States, Florida, Ft. Myers

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silver sanguine moon

An old oak tree that hangs in the night, lit by the moon.
A cloying smell of the jasmine bloom.
This taste hangs between us like a moan
and beckons us to venture far from home.
To tame my wild, brambled heart.
Rip wide the tide that holds the ocean at its start.
A mountain of remembrance,
becomes the fragrance of regret.
I taste of salt from the waterfall of tears I let.
While, owls eyes pierce right through you,
and lend me the truth of how I never knew you.
This taste hangs between us like a moan,
and quells the trembles of my bone.
I see that there is nothing left for us to build
A mountain has come between to cause…
a valley we will never fill.
In this night sanguine,
The full moon hangs heavy,
but with pride,
reminding me of how I encompass the tide,
which rips wide the ocean at its start….
and rolls in to whisper of how you are not worthy of my heart.

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Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-10 23:39
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Smashing. I love it. Keep up the good work.
Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend Online- 2008-05-06 13:33
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I like this very much, especially
"the taste that hangs between us like a moan"
and
the mountain that creates a valley.

Very nice!
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