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Lilli
Lilli Ahmadpour
United States, FL, Parkland

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Because of You

Because of you, through the Grace of God,
I have felt the security of His embrace.
I have heard the cry of angels on my behalf.
I have seen the comforting eyes of Christ.
I have seen the welcoming smile on His face.

Because of you, through the Power of God,
I feel the cooling raindrops on my face.
I feel the warmth in the ray of hope.
I feel the love that knows no boundaries.
I feel each breath and recognize its strength.

Because of you, through the Love of God,
I know the power that accompanies a prayer said on my behalf.
I know the grace and sacrifice given me from my divine siblings.
I know that each breath, touch, heartbeat, and tear is in perfect time with the heavenly Conductor.

Because of you, through Hope in God,
I will continue to fight – but realize the battle is His.
I will remain steadfast in His Word.
I will overcome and we will all cry TRIUMPH!

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easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 - 2008-05-07 17:46
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This is very powerful, positive and inspirational.

i liked the way you capitalized Grace, Power, love and Hope for emphasis and the formatting of the first lines and your POV in the first person following the rest of the stanzas.

I do believe that the last word should have an "ly" after it since it is a adverb.
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