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Once you had
A great teacher
Bringing life
To your words.
The students were amazed
And believed in your fame
While devouring
Cloned fish.
But the class once again
Has fallen asleep
And your once
Glorious words
Now received
Without passion,
Your technology
For miracles
Now surpassed
By our own.
You boasted on
Seven days to
Create a world.
We will show you
That in one day
We can destroy it.
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wow, succinct. blood, sweat and tears in an attempt to gain the whole world. Yet man can cause so much damage in such a short time with very little thought.
