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How do I concern you?
Yes! Because you concern me
that my personality and intellectuality
likes what I like
loves what admires me
I like that likes me
I like that shows me like
and cares that concern me
because that attention to me
made me likes you
and put you as my concern
You like me by showing care
and I must show you concern
to acknowledge the fact like
to register the fact concern
and I will show my concern
as at this time
I will like you to show me like
show me the real concern
showcase the fact CARE
When I smile
just take it
and shows my real CONCERN
Ahmad Abubakar (2005)
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