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Chipped Nails
your plastic smile gives off
a bitter odour in the untimely summer
rain. i
shrug; not for me
things of stolen beauty.
i dip my fingers in a bowlful of words—they
keep me sane. you
bite the notes of rapture that rise in my head.
(and, suddenly, every
place inside me
is anti-utopia.)
splinters of my dappled heart are strewn all over
our little confetti-laden
coffee table.
your terriblebrown voice cuts
through the trace of a twirl.
(it was lingering over
my fretful toes, and now it’s gone.)
i slip into another world, away
from this tirelonesome
reality, and i
start worrying about my
chipped nails.
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| I like your irony, the way you keep the tension up, and your closing! |
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Comment by: JayBean - 2008-05-09 07:37
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BRILLIANT!! a very fun, witty, blended meaning piece! i enjoyed !!
J.B. |
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