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JayBean
Jelly Bean
New Zealand, Auckland

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minute truth

Just a poem
Escaping from my heart
Seemingly innocent
Unnoticed by the crowd
Simple, yet perfectly astounding
(c)Jellybean'08

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mikepyro Comment by: mikepyro Online- 2008-05-14 16:32
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must say it's great.
very simple and enchanting.
well done.
vanessaniki Comment by: vanessaniki - 2008-05-09 09:41
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It's very very lovely and sweet. Thank you :)
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-09 09:37
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<<----not missing a thing

Perfectly astounding....
JayBean Comment by: JayBean - 2008-05-09 07:53
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;-)
Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend - 2008-05-09 07:47
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Clever and subtle! Excellent! And you know there are others that will miss it totally... :-)
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