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akabinny
Lindsay Leggett
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Ciao, Edie

Inspired by Sam S Sterling's (tried to link it, but didn't work) Poem about Syd Barret, I decided I just had to write something about Edie Sedgwick. I haven't edited it at all, but here it is.


The floors were yellow-stained
like my slowly rotting teeth,
Those days at Silver Hill.
Those days at Silver Hill,

Were like the bottles of my brother
that were broken on the floor,
where they still lie,
where they still lie beneath his swinging feet.

The doctors say I need to eat.
The doctors say I need to pray,
but praying is for losers
and I'd rather starve all day
at Silver Hill,

Where thinking is for Dreamers,
and the screamers are the sanest
and the losers keep on praying,
But God just doesn't answer
so the prayers end up staying,
and the rest of me starts swaying,

Onward.
With the (youth)quake of the sixties
where the factories and glamour
and the bright lights of the cities
wrap around me like a cobra,
squeezing me until I burst
and gasping on the concrete floor
I found I had a little thirst
for something, really, anything more,

Than when those lights are shining
and HE paints me up like dusk.
It's the electric pulsing filling me,
everytime I smell the dust
that's spilled all over all the floors
and walls and paint and metal beams,
and all the junkies lying there,
are holding up the factory doors.

They say I set the world on fire
but please, oh please, don't leave me here,
alone, here in Manhattan
where it's cold and I'm forgotten.
Why, I'm homeless and I'm trashy,
so I'll take another poke, another toke
another smoke.
Just to forget the lines HE spoke to me,
forget HIS stupid, ugly face.

But even now HE haunts me
as the lights begin to dim,
Oh, promise me, just promise me,
that I will never fade away,
that I will never fade away.

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jauhar Comment by: jauhar Online- 2008-05-12 00:03
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I understood the poem even without knowing who any one was, I figured it was about a troubled individual.
Never the less i googled it and found your poem was like reading a brief biography.
It was well but together.
When I was going to school they taught us Peotic License; it is a license given to a poet to write what ever they wanted in any style, so your HE was understood.
I enjoyed the read and the history lesson.
Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling - 2008-05-09 14:20
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Ok, a little more researched and better understood, especially as you have given us clues to lines like ''where they still lie beneath his swinging feet.'' I was struck first time round to these very demonstrative HE and HIS references. I've always been ambivalent about Andy Warhol. To me his legacy will always be about the people under whose light he flourished (like Lou Reed) rather than 'HE' himself. But sometimes charismatics seem tend to produce as many casualties as celebrities. I'm thinking Edie was one. I dont know why but just trying to take a step back, some half-remembered lyrics from very early David Bowie came to mind, Bowie who was very into Lou Reed and even wrote a song on Hunky Dory dedicated to Andy Warhol. I guess there are Bowies who having (multiple) egos can afford to orbit the Sun, whereas others get sucked into its surface. I cant offer direct advice on the last two stanzas but maybe explore the lyrics of people who need to feed on persona as if it is the elexir of life. I have in mind Lou Reeds 'Waiting for my Man' as a confessional of a destructive (drug) dependence fed by total humiliation and depersonalisation as part of the deal, and the sweet bitterness of Dylans 'Like a Rolling Stone' which seems to describe the descent into oblivion of one person once cared for. Hate to plug my own work (he lied!) but my 'For Sandy' poem covers familiar territory though from a self-inflicted angle.
akabinny Comment by: akabinny Online- 2008-05-09 13:15
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A little background that I used. Edie Sedgwick (for all who may or may not know) was a friend and actor in films by Andy Warhol, as well as model, party girl, and unfortunate victim of drug abuse.

Silver Hill is one of the psychiatric wards where she stayed as a young girl, where her alcoholic brother also stayed, and eventually hung himself.
After being released from hospitalization due to anorexia and the like, She attended school for art, then met with Andy Warhol, who snapped her up and gave up painting to make her a star. Coming from a wealthy family, she invested all of her money in him, and received nothing but an addiction to heroin. She died before the age of thirty, but for any who have seen her films or pictures, well, there's nothing else to say. (HE refers to Mr. Warhol.)
Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling - 2008-05-09 13:10
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aha, I have just sent you a PM regarding Syd. I must confess total ignorance concerning Edie Sedgwick, so I shall go google. I say at this point perhaps I understand that there may be points of reference here that may seem screamingly obvious to you, but for the uninitiated may be a muystery. As with my poem on Syd anyone familiar with his story (not editred readers I guess LOL) would recognise my esoteric references to e.g. games for may, mirrored telecaster, mandrax mask etc. I guess there are 'cognoscenti' references here? I guess the common bond, and Im being speculative about this, is the loss of someone we felt part of our lives, but whos actual lifecourse we could (sadly) not influence? I'll check it out but even without knowing this sounds like, and you have brought it to the fore so well here, a 'sigtnificant' influence on your life?
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