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“What will it take to complete you as no other ever has?” his question made her pause- did she want to be completed by anyone?
She took her time answering him- she knew the question was important- for him- the answer was just as important- for her. “To be able to fill all of who I am. With the ultimate balance of mind, body and spirit.”
“I like that and I'd like to achieve that with you-I've never had that to the degree of which you speak--close but just out of reach. Did you get the last photo?”
“I did”
“Did it meet with your approval?”
“It did”
“Good” a single word that managed to create shivers up her spine and an ache in her core. She placed her finger under her skirt- she knew she would find moisture there- wanting more than photos and on line messaging. “What are you thinking?” he asked
“That I want to touch you.”
“What makes you want that?”
“Are you ever going to take your pants ALL the way off?”
“lol...maybe”
“I want to touch you because I want to watch as your eyes burn for me as I place my hands on your skin for the very first time. I want to touch you because I HAVE to know if while touching you that I will burn for you.” She paused and looked again at the photo he had sent her, art work really as he was a photographer, the black and white portraits generated to kindle the senses showing not nearly enough. “Any more?”
“Anymore what?” he teased
“Let me think” she teased him back playfully “any more what? Pictures maybe
“Let me see....” he returned
“You love taking these knowing you would be driving me crazy....waiting for the next one....waiting until you showed me all of you.”
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Pretty good. I think you should work on your dialogue (sp.) transitions a little more, and lengthen your dashes so they become hyphens (or is it the other way around...o_o)? Either than that, a very interesting beginning.
