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| Thank you Phil. JK Sheppard |
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| Its an amazing piece that really captures that elusive spirit of a season. The style reads almost an extended haiku, and I like it very much. Mucho Kudos. |
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| I like how you discuss the wind without exactly defining it. The phrase "the trees leaf now" seems a bit awkward to me though. |
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| It's beautiful. This poem makes me think of my dad's fruit trees. The apple tree and the nectarine tree blossoms have a wonderful smell and they look so pretty in the springtime. |
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| SIGH... Everytime I read your poetry I cannot help but think Robert Frost... Amazing... another great piece from you... There is a peaceful air to this poem that relaxes me... |
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