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Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-11 14:26
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| Thank you Matt....visual aids are what make the nighttime all the sweeter wouldnt you say? |
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strong theme; the words so well paint a picture, especially the end:
"visual aids
provided
for our stage
as we commence
our passion play …
… in the dark …" |
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Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-05-10 19:52
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| A sweet poem! I like it very much. |
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Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-10 17:18
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Thank you stopxlight...I rarely have the "expected ending"......
Thank you Wilde...this was a good one to write..... |
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| What can I say? This is terrific. It's tight, economical, sexy..love the candles and "fingers running through hair little boy messy" Great! A+++ |
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