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tiziana rinaldi
Tiziana Rinaldi Castro
United States, NY, Brooklyn

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We, the sepulchered seeds

We were infinitely open to the kneading of the air
and time and darkness were laid upon us.
Sparrows would feast on our giving

But, hidden in small, asphyctic jars- a company for the dead-
we didn't turn and neither we became.
Counted for, whispered a prayer upon,
we were given in hope of a spring beyond,
and then forgotten.
Sparrows could not find us.

When they pry open the place of rest,
all rises to meet the light, and what was completed
-even when cut down before its time-
as ripe as a fruit uneaten, decays once more.

We, unplanted, uncared, un-waited for
do not die neither parch,
as unlived is the life that wasn't grown of us.
We are un-alive and undead,
unprotected by the winter cold,
un-awakened by the warmth of spring.
And a sparrow, now, would leave us unclaimed.

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Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-11 09:46
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I like the structure and the style of it. That is what stands out. Very nice. Very nice.
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