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The Place Promised in Our Early Days
It kind of sucks
that we live in
two different words,
and can't see
each other.
Every part of me
hurts
with this loneliness,
and in this cold distant world,
I keep running from these jagged towers.
I can't find anyone else,
and I can't wake up.
I feel like if I could
just keep this feeling,
just for a second,
everything would be perfect.
If I could just tell you
how I've felt all this time,
if these feelings wouldn't
go away. I cry out,
PLEASE GOD!
And then I wake up.
I feel like there is something I need to
tell you...
But...
It's gone now.
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| well, I didn't write those lines. that's what Sayuri says in that movie when she wakes up from her coma. I forgot to mention that. This is about a movie by the title name. REALLY good. |
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wow I really like how I can relate to this one. Thats one thing that I like about most of your works, I seem to be able to relate to them someway.
"I feel like there is something I need to
tell you...
But...
It's gone now."
These are by far my favorite lines in this poem. They seem to give the whole piece so much more meaning. Keep on sharing |
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