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pitbull
Kim Salone
Australia, NSW, Sydney

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SOCIETY

Sitting on a bench at a heart of a city. Beautiful gardens well maintained. It is a site to see, what a beautiful place. A stranger would think.
People walking the streets in such rush, pushing one another. They are supposed to relax on their lunchbreak yet they are rushing that too. There is no time. This life is one long marathon containing many more races to come.
I observe people around me. Respectful people in business suits and a name tag around their neck. They are the important people of our society. Yet on a Friday night they get so drunk they don’t realise they are sitting naked on their balcony. They scream so loud at 3 o’clock in the morning “Fuck the real estate”. In two weeks time they are out. Kicked out because of the constant complaints. Yep, they are the same people.
But what they do not realise is that, they are not even important the slightest. Regardless of their Armani suits. They are just numbers. We are all just numbers, a Society.
Society does not recognise individualism.
What about those same people who happen to earn a decent amount of money for sitting in meetings and drinking coffee all day. Lets not gat sidetracked here.
The point is I’ve watched them argue at the supermarket with an innocent cashier over 20 cents. Being overcharged by 20 cents.
It is somewhat funny but it comes with a great sadness. How materialistic have people become. Is there any real values left for us to judge?
As long as you’ve got a car and nice clothes, you are it. You are a member of a respectable society.
No thank you even if the membership was free.

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pj Comment by: pj - 2008-05-13 06:08
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beautiful, the so called civilised society, dire straits a true reflection of the morden world, we are all the same driven by geed and materilisation Your stories and poems are heartfeltI would lke to know what inspired you to write this story ?
rupertdepaula Comment by: rupertdepaula Online- 2008-05-13 02:56
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hey,

i didn't get offended...far from it. i agree with your statement more than disagree. i just said not 100%.

some of history's greatest individuals were people who used society class system and 'money hungryness' for their own benefit.

example: pop music.

lennon and dylan are some of the greatest artistic individuals in recent history, but they both made a lot of wedge in their time...they used the system.

i see the kind of people you're talking about all the time, and yes, they are idiots. every trashpit bar heaves with these guys on a friday night.

but not everyone with money has no class, and not everyone with no money has class - or should be applauded just because they didn't join the rat race.

your personal choices define who you are. and what are personal choices other than examples of your individuality?
pitbull Comment by: pitbull - 2008-05-12 18:47
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thanx I appriciate your view on the topic..It was just an introduction to my view, as I see it evryday right infront of my door step..It is not made up...by the way those people getting drunk etc. were my neighbours haha
schwagkilla Comment by: schwagkilla - 2008-05-12 18:29
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This piece is interesting. It has potential bc I think it can be much more than a critique on what society believes success to be. I would like to see if you can elaborate a bit more on this armani wearing cheapskate in disguise that society praises, and why the perception is so utterly incorrect.
pitbull Comment by: pitbull - 2008-05-12 14:46
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I guez haha my REALIZE comes from my slang as I used to write song lyrics for a hip- hop rnb band...as for rupert: maybe you are one of those people in suits I describe so thats why you got offended...sorry if dats the case...how can you be an individual in a money hungry society...
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