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| Lovely poem and very heartfelt, as short as it is. Awesome! |
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Comment by: pitbull - 2008-05-12 16:27
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| beautiful poem very descriptive, you paint a picture in my mind about how you feel.. |
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| Really Nice. I think if you separated the last line, and made a fifth line out of, " Only memories remain", it would be even more powerful. Just my two cents. But, really good job. |
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| I adore this. The ability to say so much in such few words is one that not many people possess. The imagery is extremely powerful, I adore the line, "the day is darker than the starless night", it's simply stunning. |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-05-12 05:03
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| Hi, a very good ramantic poem. You are expert on expressing yourself with the simple description of inviroment. Well done! |
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