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jcp200817
Carlos Perez
United States, NC, Dobson

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Breaking Away

I got my nails painted black,
twenty dollars in my wallet.
I'm walking out, no looking back.

I want to make it to Hollywood.
Were the girls come fast,
and party's thrown like they should.

I want to get away from here,
the same old things in this small town.
I want to go fall head over heels.

My name will be known,
and my face will be recognized.
On every commercial it will be shown.

I just want to break the monotony.
Be something no one expects.
I want to be anything, except a celebrity.

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jcp200817 Comment by: jcp200817 - 2008-06-12 21:39
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Thats a thing people shouldn't worry about, especially writers. It should not matter if you get hate mail...as long as what you are writing is what you believe in then its OK. The hate mail just means someone is listening. Might not be what you want to hear/read but hey at least someone is reading.
chelseyam Comment by: chelseyam - 2008-06-12 21:35
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Do yourself a favor...go to NYC instead...Cali changes people...and not for the best...Ill get a lot of hate mail for this comment.
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