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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
United States, WA, Seattle

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lonely alone

silence
flat dead quiet
perched in front of a screen
so lonely alone
with loves lost and unseen
my bed vibrates with empty
dreams left hanging
unshared
unheard whispers in the night
and no confidence bared
passing strangers on sidewalks
fierce glance
blazing eyes
its just me
dont be scared
desires burning
nighttime cries
bright lights
flashing
above us
rhythm pounding
wild
fast beat
our swaying bodies encased
in the wetness of heat
dance inferno
lovelocks
sparks shoot in the night,
lips meshing
arms wrapped
keep desire from flight
are you the one?
Is it you?
can I lure you home
are you ready to leave, …
… lost and lonely.....
… alone?

april 2007

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard - 2008-05-15 19:49
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thank you jorbian...
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-15 19:37
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I like it. I shall say that.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard - 2008-05-12 21:13
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Thank you FC.....I believe this is the third poem I ever wrote...and I'm still rather fond of it....
Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend - 2008-05-12 21:03
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It's wonderful, sensual, erotic. I can almost smell it. :-) I love the short phrases and the way the whole thing fits together. It's terrific!

FC
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