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| so emotionally profound. reminds me of the REM song/line: "this one goes out to the one I love, This one goes out to the one I left behind." |
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Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-14 07:19
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| Danah and JB, thank you both for such wonderful comments....I do appreciate them~ |
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| Lovely piece ... it seems heartfelt and honest and a lot of people can relate, I am sure. Excellent work! |
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Comment by: JayBean - 2008-05-14 01:53
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wow! It is very satisfying to find poetic work like this! Eller Wheller Wilcox is my hero in the poetic department - i think you'd like her work as you have a similar style.
I find your poem very refreshing with a beautiful flow.
"Malnourished hearts
die a quiet death ...
...leaving nothing but
wistful thoughts...
of what might have been~"
i LOVE this last verse! just perfect!
thank you
J.B. |
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Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-13 10:27
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| Thank you Wanda.....xoxox |
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