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AHMADABUBAKAR
AHMAD ABUBAKAR
Nigeria, KANO

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She is

Looks and looks all over me
Looks and admire you me
the chemistry do works by impulse
as the physique,taste and likes

For your heart has arrested mine
indicted it and convicted for a crime
like Bee's droppings that turns Honey

You look me penitentialy for
not to dare it
then send me to a penitentiary
of your brain and
may I be the student that your persona
will guide on

In my dream she coo me
you be the half top of my eight
the upper cycle on top
it swept me with ocean of relief

The day breaks,she cross me
I turned then the dictum disturbs
smile do the tricks and she sent me back
to the garden, with flowers over me

Hum !, I do...you too


Copyright © 2006 Dr Ahmad Abubakar

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Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-13 17:56
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I love it. It is so vivid in its imagery.

The last line is the only thing which throws me off...
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