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Jorbian
J. D. Boller
United States, Arizona, Prescott

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Stand

Stand
Stand up
Stand up now
Stand up right now
Stand up and be heard
Stand up and be counted
Stand up before its too late
Stand up and take what can be yours
Stand up and fight for all to be free

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TouchRosesAhna Comment by: TouchRosesAhna - 2008-05-17 00:38
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I love how your poem stands up!
chelseyam Comment by: chelseyam - 2008-05-15 20:40
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"Amerika I given you all and now I am nothing...."
I get you.
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-13 16:58
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With this I was experimenting with a form called the Nonet, except in reverse. With an increasing or decreasing number of syallables I found that it could give the feeling of something growing, or diminishing. The Repetition I hoped would put a sense on the begining of the line other then syllable numbers. I have been experimenting to make the reader notice the number of syllables, I would like to know if this does it.
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