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PBlakey
Philippa Blakey
United Kingdom, North Yorkshire, Scarborough

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self appreciation

What stunned me was the overwhelming desire
to leave
and amongst desperate attempts to prove myself considerate
we discussed fixtures and fittings
the banality of shifts gone by
and Italian men in tailor-made suits

the futility of it all was lost
amidst the familiar comfort
of tray tables, cracked plastic jugs and heavy air

after confusion in the lift, I felt the zing of life ripple right through me

alongside the deep and unshifting irony

of being glad it wasn't me.

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jacoverdale Comment by: jacoverdale - 2008-05-24 09:55
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"the futility of it all was lost
amidst the familiar comfort" beautiful, i really enjoy the way you use language.
Thankyou
JayBean Comment by: JayBean - 2008-05-14 02:16
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nice piece.

thank you
J.B.
digs Comment by: digs - 2008-05-14 01:38
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Wonderful.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-05-14 01:08
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Well done! I appreicaite your special writing style! I will read more of your poems. Best wishes.
Lander Comment by: Lander Online- 2008-05-14 00:55
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You are certainly back on form with this one. How I wish I could write these little gems.
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