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i'm almost thinking you should cut out the last 3 lines...
that beginning is cuntingly awesome.
womb-wounded...
pisses me off i didn't think of that first...
great first 6 lines. |
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Your cunt is your cunt, girl, and make sure that you don't let any other cunt own it.
Isabella. |
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Comment by: history - 2008-05-14 10:23
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| You like the theme?? That seems a little sick. |
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| Hmm... I like the theme.. You have a peculiar writing style.. It's more like a poetic letter.. Well done! |
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I love this. Thank you for sharing something so intimate.
Should be: "guilt-filled"
Good write on a risque topic. |
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