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Jorbian
J. D. Boller
United States, Arizona, Prescott

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On my Love

Unquenchable sorrow
no hope in tomorrow
but pray to tomorrow
to put out the sorrow

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-05-19 07:46
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Hi, I like this short poem very much. You have the great spirit to be a very good poet. Would you please comment on my short poems if you like?
shuchikalra Comment by: shuchikalra - 2008-05-14 20:49
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You have said a lot in just four lines....i have used a similar rhyme scheme in one of my recent poems...i think its great!
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