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FantasticFantasy
Raven Coleman
United States, Wishin' I was in, Japan

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Life is a garden, so dig it!

Grow
Grow
these hopes
these dreams,
the future of
these distant things.

Wither
Wither
these hopeful flowers
these glassy lies,
the future of
your shining eyes.

Listen
Talk
these sunken eyes
these salty tears,
the future of
my life comes near.

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spiritedpony Comment by: spiritedpony - 2008-05-22 22:08
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I really like what you're saying. Simply to the point. Very good!!!
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian Online- 2008-05-15 19:30
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I like it. Its so simple. Its brevity is amazing. And the philosophy shines through. Good job. Great job I say.
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