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wgallant
Wayne Gallant
United States, FL, Morriston

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Really retro rhyme with rapid rhythm

Seven sailors swimming south to Sydney
Turn their tired thoughts to times in tales
Underseas an urgent unfelt union
Visitors in vexing vicious veils

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akabinny Comment by: akabinny - 2008-06-15 10:15
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Absolutely, I ardently adore alliteration.
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-16 18:42
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Zomg! Old English metre. This is amazing. I heart Old English metre!
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