writing community
Sign In Here | Lost Password | FREE Sign Up
E-mail: Password:
Remember login  
The place for writers:
Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world.       Learn how other writers are doing it.

 
vanessaniki
Lady Bug
United States, Ca, La Puente

Words: 140
Access: Public
Comments: 2

Forward to a friend
Print Version
E-mail this writer E-mail this user 
View Author profile
Add to Readers  




Just me by grace

Everyone has an opinion of me
who I am
Or who they want to see
But can I be? Will you let me be
Just me by grace?

I do not know what the future holds
But if I trust in God, I'm told
That all the truth in front of me will unfold
And I will be allowed to be
Just me by grace

Let God lead you, I heard you say
As you proceed to show me your way
And then get upset when I stray
Weren't you the one who advised me to be
Just me by grace?

So while you wait for me to make mistakes
He knows the path I'll undertake
My future is in His hands and His to make
And for His purpose, I will be
Just me by grace.

Want to comment on this Poetry?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
Sign up






[Back to top]
Comments  
phillmag Comment by: phillmag Online- 2008-05-17 03:31
Add to Readers
      
thanks for this wonderful poem. i love the theme and the rhyme.
Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling Online- 2008-05-16 10:46
Add to Readers
      
very well related, the existential dilemma that is deep within us all. You know I dont share youre faith but I respect it, and here you have given good account of the difficulty in ploughing the furrow between being right in th eyes of others, and having the right to be wrong sometimes. I hope you will always be, just you by grace.
1

Sponsored Ads


By vanessaniki

Featured Writers

Advertising - Terms & Conditions - Short Story Submissions - Contact - Writing Competitions - Writing Links - Book Promotion - Sky-Tribe.com - alanemmins.com
  Member short stories, poems, comments and other contributions are owned by the poster.
Copyright 2003 - 2007 Edit Red I/S