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vanessaniki
Lady Bug
United States, Ca, La Puente

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Unconditional

Love not deserved
Love unearned
She gives it to me
Unconditionally

Pushing me then pulling me
Closer to God
A love reciprocated between us two
She sustains me
She holds my heart
Because she knows it's fragile

All I am is because I studied
Her
She is my lighthouse
pointing me in the right direction

Maternal instinct is the fuel
the inertia that drives her
to strive for excellence
I wish I had some of her juice

A true Proverbs 31 woman
Worth more than rubies
More than life itself
Her children arise and call her blessed

Brandon Lee said it best
"Mother is the name for God
on the hearts and mouths
of children everywhere"

Pushing then pulling me
Closer to God
A love not deserved, a love unearned
The love of a mother
She gives it to me
Unconditionally

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voodoochild Comment by: voodoochild - 2008-06-15 10:01
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how spiritual... thanks for this... =)
insightariot Comment by: insightariot - 2008-05-20 21:42
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beautiful expression here
phillmag Comment by: phillmag - 2008-05-17 03:37
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thanks for another wonderful poem.
metaphysicalg Comment by: metaphysicalg Online- 2008-05-16 14:25
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beautiful
Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling Online- 2008-05-16 10:54
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and very well put here, if I may say, as an unbeliever. This is actually very thought provoking, and no Im not being cynical. There is only the very thinnest sliver of light betwen the unconditional love of being a Mother made know to us in a very concrete sense, and that which we are told is abstract, the love of God, in whatever way we imagine Her incarnation to be.
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