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drchase
dante cox
United States, new york, newburgh

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This Is The Generation

This is the generation...where elementary stains ya mindframe

U cant forget all things u dont wanna remember

they all sayin "its all about me" im sayin "its all about u"

U see ya fam...the atmosphere feels like december

Cuz when u make difference in the world its hard to doubt u

When one person says ya name...another knows all about u

This is the generation...where u gotta run b4 u walk

Where u know song lyrics before u can read

U can scream all day...not add...can hardly talk

B4 u graduate u have ya 1st seed

This is the generation of the diseased

Friendship is a fad...without a future u pleased

U need a new hobby... u need a few hobbies

Instead of meetin ppl on websites and "i have no clue" lobbies

Ur too sobby...sit around lettin 'good enuff' suffice

Complainin lookin for help to change ur own life

That's nice...how u gonna be a role model?

When u 16 and high now u lookin for a bottle

Sittin in the club with only ya pride to swallow

But u cant even do that cuz u know lil ones will follow

Lifes full throttle...Im ridin till the wheels rip or maybe the saddle

Cuz imma spank the ones who look down on me like my arm is a paddle

Heres my motto: do what u think u want others to shadow

Cuz the real generation to worry about hold the rattles

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chrissyhallaman Comment by: chrissyhallaman - 2008-05-17 08:24
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has really good rythm and a good message.
.........maybe i shold make everyone in my school read it : )
TouchRosesAhna Comment by: TouchRosesAhna - 2008-05-17 00:32
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This has a good beat and should be a song. :)
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