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I saw
i looked
i watched
as winds went soft
then seize
I saw
i looked
i watched
when tops of trees
lift and toss
I saw
i looked
i watched
as coalescing clouds
of thundering gray
blackening skies on
a darkening day
I saw
i looked
i watched
as raindrops fell
in widening circles
on the pond
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you give such imagery. It gives me the feeling of onomatopoeia without it being so obvious, meaning I can see all of these things and hear them without all of the sound effects. It's just wonderful.
