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Space, just an empty space
As I float through the nothingness
You take me higher and deeper
Into the labyrinth of lost words
As you overtake my shot down mind
You take my dreams away
Deep down buried in an endless hole
I sit and sit and wonder who I am
You calm my out of control mind
And now it flies
High into the stars
And the moon, is yellow
Higher it takes me
To visit the land of clouds
Sit calmly and enjoy the emptiness
Isolated from the world
With the barrier of empty thoughts
I leave you in charge
Not remembering anything at all
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Very nice. It reminds me of numbness/apathy and of a peaceful meditative state... just letting go. Could go either way. Nice job putting whatever this experience was for you in words.
