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jcp200817
Carlos Perez
United States, NC, Dobson

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Graduation Goodbyes

Remember all the times we argued and fought,
The times we made fun of each other.
I can still remember,
The first day we met.
We didn't know each other,
But we treated each other like brothers.
We had lots of misunderstandings,
But tried to fix what was broken
We had lots of wonderful memories together,
And now our time is up,
We have to say goodbye.

Goodbye for now, I'll miss you,
We've been through so much,
Sometimes I still have no clue,
If we'll really keep in touch.
But please do not cry cause we WILL be in touch
One day, eventually, if not tomorrow
Will you miss me past tomorrow,
Will you know me at a glance?
I'll try hard to remember,
Every moment spent with you,
Memories might not last forever;
But the friendship we share we share will make it through.

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troyarn Comment by: troyarn - 2008-05-18 12:44
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Very touching work, Carlos. From your latest writings, it seems you are about to embark on a long strange trip. I wish you luck in that adventure and hope you will continue to fill us in with your words. You have the knack and skill to be something in the writing world and I am happy to read what you have done so far.
chrissyhallaman Comment by: chrissyhallaman - 2008-05-18 12:21
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Will you miss me past tomorrow,
Will you know me at a glance?

I like that. It's a good question.
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