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Let Me Make You Sacred
Let me make sacred once again
these crimson scars that roar your grief.
The dark songs that hide in you like angry thieves,
jeering your pale name; crouching
by the thin road of your weakness;
let me cast them out with a ringing reverence.
I long to see you through the cloud of your illusion;
to cover the slim shadows of your eyes with a broad light
and blazing wonder; to re-invent the shape
of your name: a secret murmured by a dove's flown wing;
the lapping of an autumn tide.
Let me make sacred once again
the harbour where your joy docks, and loosen
the bindings of moored sorrows. Let me worship
the rolled olive of your skin; the eyes full
of this pregnant woe; the life you walk with as
a glacier awaiting thaw.
Let me make sacred once again
with lips, as though a force could not be spent,
these crimson scars that roar your grief.
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Romance poetry to make even Yeats and his peers envious!
Beautiful. |
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| Thanks, Cherley. I have never looked at this poem from that perspective before. It's possible that many of my pieces could be taken apart in such a way, as I do tend to segment the stanzas cleanly. Thanks for the insight! |
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Comment by: Cherley - 2008-05-23 19:53
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| It seems that there could actually be 3 poems here. Each stanza could stand alone. The hidden, the weather and the sea. You pulled them all together in a great way. Some great images. |
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| Thanks, Valerie. I'm honoured that you dropped by to say so. :). |
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Comment by: Valerie - 2008-05-23 16:17
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| I have to agree with your readers, this is gorgeous. . . amazing metaphors and similes. . . beautiful poetic language that paints pictures for me. "To reinvent the shape of your name". . . so very lovely. Thank you. |
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