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TuckerWhite
TuckerWhite
United States, CA

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Puppet Fear

I've sat here forever
with my fears,
fighting off the demons
screaming in my ears.

You're not going to make it,
Why even try?
You know what you're made of,
so shut-up and hide.

Creatures are crawling,
creeping about,
no one will ever listen,
So I'm not going to shout.

I'll stare out the window,
run when the door rings,
pulled like a puppet,
fear operating my strings.

Does this sound familiar?
Am I really all alone?

Sitting here forever,
in my own home.

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Comment by: - 2006-03-02 13:58
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your poems always read easy and very interesting. those are two concepts that i like:) good stuff!
waxseal Comment by: waxseal - 2006-03-01 14:52
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Ditto what Teri's says:-)

(And I think it's really tought to make a rhyming poem not sound stupid - and you dot it well, so kudo's to you;-)
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-02-28 19:04
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Hi, Tucker, another fine poem. I don't usually like poems that rhyme as they usually seem forced, but this one doesn't. Great subject matter, too. All in all, a wonderful job! Keep writing because I enjoy it. :)
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