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Danahfaren
Nicole Schneider
Germany, Hilden

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If

If these walls could speak
They would tell about my tears
For seeing you in pain
Is hurting me too.

If I could contemplate
With your body to stay strong
No worries along your path
As the final chapter in your life
unfolds.

If I was blessed and able
To keep all sorrow away from you
Believe me, it's all I would do

If my heart has to bear
Facing dark times with you
I will see you through

This love that knows no end
The bond between child and parent
Stronger than the darkest dark

Though we may not win
For all paths come to an end
We will be winners
Because we have each other.

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Robnessa Comment by: Robnessa - 2008-11-06 12:26
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I don't know if this will make sence, but you can almost taste the feeling.
powerful piece.
Danahfaren Comment by: Danahfaren - 2008-08-20 00:09
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Thank u Ms. Wizard!
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-08-19 17:37
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Beautiful. Speaking as one who's watched a love one die and felt helpless, I can certainly relate to this lovely and very touching piece. This is very very moving...
Comment by: - 2008-05-23 06:36
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Gentle and maternal.
milner place Comment by: milner place - 2008-05-20 03:47
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Comes over strongly, Nicole. Maybe some small very personal detail might just make it even more poignant, more particularly yours. Just a thought.

Milner
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