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AtBizz
Inna Igontova
Netherlands

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The Truth

Now I know the truth.

Me – is you for yourself and me for myself.
You - is you for myself and me for yourself.
Us – is you and me together.
Ye – is how to address all those mediocre and uninteresting people. Let's thank them for not disturbing our world outside.
He – is God, who helped us meet each other.
And Them – are all those mediocre and uninteresting, who will never understand us.

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jason talbott Comment by: jason talbott - 2008-05-27 00:15
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sweet reflective thoughts.
easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 - 2008-05-22 03:58
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Short and to the point. Sort of 'the spoken word' here or as Big Brother suggested, a poem.

Lets (Let's) thank them for not disturbing this (the) world outside.

is God, who [made us meet] each other (or led us to each other or caused us to meet each other)
anomalyemily Comment by: anomalyemily - 2008-05-21 18:12
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It's refreshing to see other writers who are religious.
:)
Big Brother Comment by: Big Brother - 2008-05-20 01:20
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This is more like a poem than a story, but it's very provocative. I enjoyed the concept you employed here. -B.B.
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